tomorrows book

a world lost, a world saveda kingdom fallen, a kingdom risinga broken palace, a cracked thronea fallen prince, a prayer to goda hero''''s downfall, a villain''''s feata welcome blessing, an unfinished cursean avenger will rise.___________________________________________________________________________________________this my first story so, cut me some slack plz. and I will accept constructive criticismalso, can people please comment! Statistics Overall Score .star-3230-overall-479f10c1daf54eefa31cdb04f4d889dc:after{ width: 100.9% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 15,556 Average Views : 1,296 Followers : 7 Favorites : 1 Ratings : 1 Pages : 41 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author seeker of the sun