tomorrows book

In the kingdom of Lux, the queen has given birth to a strange child who was believed to be a failure and a mute; a child who would die before he turned even a month old. However, much to everyone''''s surprise, the child survived. Many believe him to be a sick and disabled child, but looks can be deceiving. For in truth he is Miragus, the King of Mages, and he shall rise to glory once more.--This is my first time writing a story, so go easy on me please. Constructive criticism is welcome, however, as I hope to improve my writing skills. Statistics Overall Score .star-7394-overall-4d47553d825f4b7b99a0dc0e7290fead:after{ width: 63.7216% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 12,207 Average Views : 1,526 Followers : 48 Favorites : 12 Ratings : 3 Pages : 22 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author