so, the entries were reviewed, and the winner decided.

  but before that, some honorable mentions.

  corepotato: (close quote)

  "reading this chapter was like attending a justing bieber concert"

  ouch. but the best is still to come.

  "and even if you ignore all that, it's still shit."

  ...

  if i thought you were serious, i'd be offended. good job.

  jackajack:

  go read it for yourself.

  n00bs.

  Troll:

  just...

  yes. yes indeed.

  and finally... (drumroll)

  dadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadad

  the winner...

  dadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadaddadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadadada

  BlackToTheFuture!

  (authors thoughts)

  damn...

  this is the first sentence.

  Support creative writers by reading their stories on Royal Road, not stolen versions.

  "there are two ways to dislike fanfiction. one is to dislike it, and the other is to read yours."

  ...

  when i first read it, my heart stopped. i thought,

  i'm worthless.. no one cares about me... you don't have to say that... i already know i'm a terrible person...

  honestly, it hurt. when i first read this comment. i sat there thinking, for a split second, 'maybe i should just give up on writing?'

  then i realized it was his entry to the competition, and i laughed my ass off. and my legs. then i inverted and started doing some crazy techno shit.

  the rest of the comment is just spreading lemon juice on a wound, and damn it hurts.

  congratulations, BlackToTheFuture, you are the first person on the internet who made me have suicidal thoughts. :D