Another year flew by as swiftly as the autumn leaves carried on the wind. I was now six, teetering on the brink of seven, and still, my Factor had yet to reveal itself. Everyone assured me it would appear next year—always next year—but the waiting gnawed at me. Every night, as I lay in bed, I would dream of the moment when I would finally know my true path. Would I be a warrior, a mage, or perhaps something else entirely? The uncertainty was a quiet torment, a constant shadow trailing my thoughts.
Meanwhile, Juliet had grown like a sprout after spring rains. At just over a year old, she had transformed from a tiny, squirming bundle into a curious, mischievous little whirlwind. She had learned to crawl with surprising speed and confidence, her tiny hands reaching for everything in sight—especially the fragile things we foolishly left within her grasp.
Her first few words were hesitant but undeniably precious: “Mama,” “Dada,” and, to my immense delight, “Lona,” which basically was my name. Unfortunately, she also had an uncanny knack for finding trouble. Just last week, she’d pulled herself upright using the side of a table and toppled a vase—one of my mother’s favorites. The sound of shattering porcelain was as shocking as her delighted giggle afterward. My parents scolded her gently, but how could they stay angry with that impish smile and sparkling green eyes?
The village kids hadn’t let up, of course. If anything, their taunts had escalated. Some days, they even brought their older siblings in an attempt to intimidate me. But their efforts were wasted. Each time, I stood my ground, and more often than not, I sent them running back home with bruised pride. It seemed I had grown stronger than most kids my age, though I couldn’t decide if it was my training or sheer stubbornness.
This year, my training had taken a new turn. With fire magic firmly under my control, I had turned my focus to another element: earth magic. It was slower, more deliberate than fire, but there was a power in it that felt oddly familiar. Using Maren’s book as my guide, I’d poured countless hours into practice, shaping the soil beneath my feet and raising jagged stone pillars from the ground.
The effort paid off—I had finally reached Novice-tier in earth magic. Not bad for someone without a Factor, I thought proudly.
In just three days, another important milestone awaited me: my seventh birthday. In this world, birthdays weren’t celebrated with equal fanfare every year. The seventh year was significant, marking the transition from early childhood to a time of learning and growth. And the fourteenth year? That was when someone officially came of age. It seemed fair, I thought, to focus on the moments that truly mattered.
My mother had been bustling about for days, preparing for the celebration. She insisted it would be a modest affair, but I could sense her excitement in the way she hummed as she baked sweet loaves of bread and carefully embroidered new tablecloths. My father, on the other hand, was less subtle. He’d already crafted a wooden practice dummy for me, claiming it was “just a project,” but I knew better.
The day had come at last. My seventh birthday. The morning dawned bright and crisp, the sun casting golden rays over the village as if the heavens themselves had blessed the occasion. My mother had invited some neighbors and close family friends, including Edna. To my surprise—and quiet joy—Edna actually came. She arrived quietly, her somber demeanor unchanged, but there was a softness in her eyes as she handed me a small wooden box wrapped in a cloth. “Happy birthday, Ronan,” she murmured. I thanked her warmly, sensing the effort it must have taken her to attend.
Our home was alive with joy that day. Laughter echoed through the air, mingling with the scent of fresh bread, roasted vegetables, and honey-glazed treats my mother had spent the entire morning preparing. My father, always one for hearty celebrations, poured drinks for the adults and shared stories about my childhood antics that had everyone chuckling. Juliet, too young to understand the occasion, crawled around the room with a wide grin, babbling in delight as she found herself the center of everyone’s attention.
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I felt happiness like I hadn’t in a long time. The warmth of the celebration surrounded me, and for a while, I forgot about everything that weighed on me—the taunts of the village boys, the uncertainty of my Factor, even the ache of Miquella and Maren’s absence. I was surrounded by people who cared for me, and for that, I was deeply grateful.
We ate, we drank, and we celebrated. The adults toasted to my future, while the other children played games outside, their shrieks of laughter drifting in through the open windows. I couldn’t stop smiling, my chest swelling with a mix of pride and contentment.
Then, it was time for gifts. One by one, they were handed to me, each wrapped in colorful paper or cloth. Edna’s gift was the first I opened—a simple, thoughtful offering. She had given me a new shirt, soft and well-made, paired with trousers that seemed to promise both comfort and practicality. It was clear she’d chosen it carefully, with a knowing look in her eyes that I couldn’t quite place. Others followed suit, giving me more clothes and useful tools—a small pouch filled with herbs for my training, a sturdy pair of gloves, and a knife with a beautifully carved handle.
But the best surprises came from my parents.
My mother, her eyes gleaming with excitement, handed me a slender package wrapped in soft cloth. When I unwrapped it, my breath caught in my throat. It was a wand—a beautiful one. The wood was smooth, polished to a deep, rich brown, and at the top was a small stone, shimmering faintly in the light. I could feel the magic embedded within it, a quiet hum of power waiting to be unlocked. “It’s for your training,” she said softly, her voice filled with love and pride. “You’ll learn to master it, just as you’ve begun with your other skills.”
It must have cost a lot, just for me.
I could only nod, overwhelmed with gratitude.
Then came my father, grinning broadly as he presented a large, carefully wrapped package. Inside, nestled carefully within straw, was a training mannequin—just like the ones I’d seen in the larger training halls. But what really made my heart race was the sword. A real sword. It was light, just the right size for my height, and perfectly balanced. I could feel the weight of it in my hands, and the excitement of holding such a tool of training was palpable. "A good sword, Ronan," my father said with a wink. "One day, you’ll know how to wield it like a true warrior."
Yet, as the sun began to set and the revelry softened into quieter conversations, my thoughts turned to those who weren’t here. Miquella. The name whispered in my mind like a breeze through the trees. I hadn’t seen her in so long, but the memories of her kindness, her strength, and her smile lingered.
I stepped outside for a moment, letting the cool evening air wash over me. The sky was a tapestry of deep oranges and purples, the first stars beginning to twinkle faintly above. As I gazed up, I found myself smiling, a quiet peace settling over me.
Who is lost isn’t gone, I thought to myself. They’re just out of reach.
Miquella, wherever she was, wasn’t truly lost to me. Neither was Maren. They were threads woven into the fabric of my life, shaping who I was and who I would become. Even if I couldn’t see them, their presence was always there—like the stars hidden behind clouds, waiting to shine through when the skies cleared.
I stayed outside for a while longer, watching the stars emerge one by one. When I finally went back inside, I felt lighter, as if I’d left a piece of my sadness behind in the night air. The party continued into the evening, the warm glow of candles illuminating the faces of those I loved.
That night, as I lay in bed, Juliet fast asleep in her cradle across the room, I felt a spark of hope.

