The sun climbed until the saddle iron scalded through my coat. Sweat ran down my back, salt stinging the raw spots where the pistol butt has rubbed skin. The column’s chatter dwindled to the grunt of leather and the hard rasp of hooves on sun?bleached clay. My tongue felt like a strip of boiled linen; even the flies lacked the water to plague us.
At the third hour past the arroyo the track steepened. Sage and broom died back, replaced by knotty grass cropped to stubble—good grazing if anything here still owned cattle. The roan leaned against the bit, saddle bunching under the climb. I rose and fell with him, every joint protesting, until the ground suddenly leveled and the bright emptiness beyond takes my breath.
Uldorf lied in the hollow below, framed by twin ridges like cupped hands. Maybe two dozen stone houses shoulder to shoulder, a scatter of wattle barns, and farther east a clutch of mud?brick hamlets hugging the curve of a wide, slow river. A bell tower—nothing grand, just beams lashed and shingled—leans slightly upslope, its brazen mouth gaping toward the hills. Smoke trickles from three rooftops, as pale as cobweb.
For one reckless moment I tasted hope as clean as springwater. A river still running, a bell still hanging—evidence that the map isn’t entirely a liar. But the feeling twists even before it settles; the village is too still, the fields too empty, the road leading in scraped bare like a scab picked raw.
Grave threw a fist in the air. The column bunches. He wheeled his horse to face us, visor lifted, eyes narrowed against the glare. Mikel edged up beside me, licking cracked lips. “Stone spring, factor. I can hear it already.”
“So can every throat in the company,” I muttered, then louder to Grave: “Let’s not parley with mirages. The sooner we draw water, the quicker we move on.”
Grave’s answer was a curt shake. “Something’s off. Look there.” He pointed with the flat of his sabre toward the village green. Even from the ridge I coould make out a knot of figures—half a dozen, maybe more—clustered around the well canopy. No uniforms I recognised. Cloaks of indeterminate cut, weapons slung but not shouldered. One sat astride a bay horse, posture lazy as a cat in sun.
Gelt raised his glass, spits softly. “Not Uldorf farm hands. Boots too clean. Sword knots bright. Travelling light, but mounted.” He lowered the glass. “Guests we didn’t invite.”
“Gustavian?” I asked. The word tasted like metal. If the eastern principality had scouts this far west, Grenzland would surely be on its last knees.
Gelt shrugged. “Could be deserters wearing whatever they found. Could be free mercs staking claim.”
Issak jogged to Grave’s stirrup, breathing easy despite the climb. “Smell of fire,” he rumbled. “Fresh pine pitch. Not village wood. Cart nearby carries barrels.”
“Tar?” Grave guessed. “Or spirits. Either way, coin.”
Mikel shifted in his saddle, eyes never leaving the river shimmer. “Captain, a sip first, questions after? They’re only a handful.”
“A handful can light a signal,” Grave said. He studied the rooftops, every line of his body tensed with unspent motion. “If they’re traders, they’ll chatter. If they’re brigands, they’ll scatter when they see ranks.”
Gelt clicked his tongue. “Or they’ll drop that bayonet pike through your chest while you’re still quoting tariffs.”
I cleared my throat. “Let me ride in with one runner. White kerchief on the barrel, empty hands. Ask for the alder or whoever’s playing one. We measure tone before steel is needed.”
Grave’s gaze snapped to me. “You certain, Factor?”
“No,” I admited, voice dry as parchment. “But I’ve talked down longshore gangs twice this size when the rum ran out. And I’d rather risk my tongue than your horsemen.”
Gelt laughed once, hard. “Look at that—our ink has grown stones!”
Grave weighted it, jaw working. Finally he nodded. “Fine. You, Issak. Flank him but keep ten strides. If they draw, break a leg before they finish the swing.”
Issak inclined his chest—no boast, merely fact accepted. I loosened the pistol in its holster, purely ceremonial—I pray—then tucked a square of linen through my belt.
Before I nudged the roan forward, Mikel leaned close. “If the spring’s clear, shout. I’ll drown myself before the captain’s next harangue.” His grin is cracked but genuine. I slapped his reins and rode.
The descent felt longer than the climb, each hoofstep ticking my pulse higher. Dust cloaked the hollows; heat twisted the air until distance shimmered. I raised the white cloth overhead, let it flop like a dying gull. The figures at the well noticed—one stood, a hand resting on a pistol grip.
I called out first in the trade?patois merchants favour: “Water rights! Free passage for word from the bastion!” It carried, but wind stole half the cadence. I slowed three lengths short of the square, palms open on the saddle horn.
Up close they’re a ragged mosaic: two in sun?bleached Gustavian blues cut short at the sleeves, one woman in a red silk vest worth a minor treasury, and a youth with a long?barrel fowler cradled like a violin. On the cart behind them sit three tar kegs and a wicker cage full of dull?eyed chickens.
The woman answered, voice honeyed and sharp. “And what does Zeltzerheim pay for news these days?”
Behind me I heard Issak’s footfalls settle, quiet as dusk. I drew a slow breath.
“Silver if it’s fresh, gold if it’s urgent, sanctuary if it’s dire,” I recited—the League’s old scale for intelligence. “Which coin is yours?”
She smiled—white teeth, a predator’s courtesy. “All three, perhaps. And maybe your purse.”
The man in half?blue spoke then, accent unmistakably Gustavic. “Ask him the counterword,” he muttered.
My pulse skipped. Code phrases across a border only spies or deserters would share.
Grave’s voice drifted down the ridge behind me: low, carrying. “Factor, call them what they are.” He trusted I knew.
I squared my shoulders. “Gentlefolk, declare yourselves: deserters, traders, or thieves. Any lie voids parley and invites voilence.”
The woman’s eyes narrowed, measuring angles—escape routes, maybe odds. The youth shifted the fowler, uneasy.
This moment hanged razor?thin: breeze, horse breathing, the river’s distant hiss—all waiting for a word.
Behind my ribs, heartbeats hammered like mallets on wet leather. I remind myself: speak first, make the ground yours.
“Choose,” I said, and pitched the sentence to carry up the ridge. “My captain counts to five, then we ride through either way.”
I never heard Grave’s count. The woman’s hand flicked beneath that scarlet vest and steel flashed in the hollow between us. My roan shrieked before I did; the pistol’s spark blossomed like a dying star at the very tip of the barrel. Smoke slapped my face, hot and greasy, and the ball hissed past my cheek with a wasp’s whine. The horse chose flight for us both—reared high, fore?shoes pawing heat?bruised air—then plunged sideways. My stomach lagged half a heartbeat behind the saddle and the sky tilted, river and dust trading places.
Hooves found ground again, hard. Instinct, no skill, hauled the reins; I clung like a ledger fly to damp paper. Somewhere behind me Issak bellowed—one word, no language I knew—and the world detonated in motion.
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The square shattered. Gelt’s light cavalry thundered off the ridge, wheel?locks cracking in ragged chorus. Muzzles spat flame, smoke billowed thick as furnace fug, and every horse in the charge screamed its own war gospel. The deserters—not deserters now, but prey—scrambled to form a ragged knot. Two fired back before panic overtook aim; white sparks burst useless against adobe. One shot punctured a barrel on the wagon—tar splashed like molten ink across the cobbles.
My roan bolted between low walls, ribs brushing chalkstone. I ducked instinctively as the youth with the fowler tracked, finger paling on the trigger. A doorway swallowed me an instant before his piece thundered; wattle splintered where my hat had been. Smoke chased me through the gloom of a goat shed, lungs burning with powder and fear.
I tore out the far side, reins sawed short, and nearly collided with Sul. The Blemmye dashed past in two strides that covered what my horse required ten to manage. His rags were already dark with someone else’s blood—the woman’s, I realised when I glanced back: her body lay across the stone lip of the well, head at a wrong angle, scarlet vest now black where Sul’s club had erased her last oath.
My god—the speed of these creatures. Their calm restraint had hidden this edge too well. Was this why their voices were pinched to whispers, their labour reduced to hauling crates and pulling carts? Not because they were strange, but because they were frighteningly capable. One swing, one heartbeat, and a life became an entry in the casualty column. I stared at Sul’s blood?spattered rags and felt a chill that had nothing to do with the river breeze. If this is the strength they carry unarmed and half?starved, what would the ledger read once they marched in forged mail?
Shots popped like corn in a braiser. Gelt rode tight circles, re?priming on the fly, trading the weight of his pistol for sabre work when clouds of smoke blinded both friend and foe. A deserter lunged at him with a boarding pike; the lieutenant leaned from the saddle and carved the man from throat to navel in a single ugly sweep. The pike clattered harmlessly. The horse kept moving. Always moving.
I found space—barely—and tore my own wheel?lock free. Hands shook, powder funnelled everywhere except the pan. I cursed the salon games that had once felt daring; real war left no room for leisure. A figure darted from behind the wagon—blue sleeves, half uniform, bayonet fixed to a cut?down musket. He spotted me too late. I snapped the doghead, sparks showered, the world blinked white—
And faded.
Misfire. Of course.
He roared and the world shrank to the wet flash of his bayonet. I had nothing but the pistol’s dead weight, so I hurled it, eyes squeezed shut like a child flinging a stone at night water. The brass cracked against flesh—cheek or brow I never saw—and that dull thud bought me one fractured breath before steel collided.
We slammed into the wagon where tar dripped like lamp?black. Wood, iron, and bone rattled in a knot; his boots ground mine into the gravel and I tasted powder on the back of my tongue. The system of polite practise thrusts deserted me—only the blunt mathematics of survival remained: keep the point away from anything you value.
He hacked, I parried; sparks kissed my sleeve and burned hair I didn’t know I had left. Pitch splashed our shins, gluing us to the fight, turning every footstep into a suctioning curse. His bayonet slid along my coat, popping buttons with neat contempt. A line of heat opened on my forearm—blood, but my brain filed the complaint for a calmer hour.
My knife—little more than a ledger clerk’s letter?opener—jabbed once, snagged leather; jabbed twice, skidded on rib. The third lunge found something soft. The blade slipped in as if the man were part water, and all the breath he’d saved billowed over my face, beer and copper and disbelief.
Time slowed to a crawl thick as tar itself. His eyes jerked from rage to plea to nothing at all while his knees buckled. We slid together, pitch embracing him first, then creeping up my boots. His fingers pawed at my belt once, searching perhaps for debt or mercy, and then fell still.
I staggered back, hand frozen to the knife hilt, heartbeat drumming so hard I feared it might rattle my ribs free. Tar, blood, powder smoke—all glued to the inside of my nose. The battle still raged beyond the wagon, but for a moment the only sound I heard was the wet tick of his last breath leaking into black pitch.
The fight compressed to noises and flashes: Grave’s voice barking orders I could not parse; the fowler booming again—too close, too loud—followed by a horse shrieking and toppling; Issak’s low chant as his fist, wrapped in chain, broke a man’s collarbone like dry bread. Everywhere the sour kiss of powder, the copper stench of blood, the high hysterical whinnies of animals who knew nothing of politics and everything of terror.
A lull—a silence where no gun barked—settled like dust. Smoke drifted in ribbons, revealing bodies sprawled at merciless angles. The youth with the fowler lay face?down, half his skull gone where Gelt’s second shot had found him. Two cavalrymen nursed wounds, one horse bled bright into the gutter, and a keg of tar blazed quietly by the well, its flame crackling a private hymn.
My heartbeat felt slower than the sun’s crawl overhead. My shirt clung, soaked. I looked for Mikel—found him crouched behind a trough, wide?eyed, sword unsheathed but unstained. When our gazes locked he managed a stunned nod, half pride, half plea to wake from nightmare.
Grave dismounted, gait stiff, sabre black to the hilt. He surveyed the square, lips pressed thin. “Three minutes,” he said, voice hoarse, “and a handful of fools almost damned a village.” He met my eyes. “Factor—water first. Then ledgers.”
I swallowed a taste of iron and ash. The well bucket lay overturned near the woman’s body. I righted it, lowered it past her slack hand, and drew the rope. The water that rose was clear, cold, innocent of the blood drying inches away. I passed the first dipper to Mikel; he drank like a man reprieved.
I stood rooted by the wagon tongue, thumb jammed against the frozen wheel of my pistol, spinning it back and forth as though stubborn steel might explain the mis?fire. Tar, blood, and grit had glued the mechanism; the doghead refused to reset, and each jerk of my hand sent a fresh tremor through my arms. I kept my eyes on the screws and springs so I would not have to see the woman Sul had felled—her bright vest now a rag, her head turned the way no living neck allows.
My breathing rattled louder than the dying flames. Powder smoke still drifted across the square, stroking her hair as if it meant an apology. A voice in me catalogued the damage—broken jaw, crushed clavicle, blood pooling in the stonework—but another voice begged silence, begged that I keep counting screws instead of bones.
“Allemand.” Grave’s tone cleaved the daze like a boarding axe. I did not look up. He stepped closer; spurs clicked against scattered rocks. “Factor, the shooting’s done. Holster the relic and use what still works—your wits.” He wiped a smear of tar from my sleeve with impatient fingers. “Bodies can wait. Living mouths can’t.”
It took a moment before meaning returned. I slid the useless pistol back into its holster, flexed stiff fingers, and forced my gaze past the well. Smoke thinned; the square was wider than before, as though the fight had pushed the stones outward and left a hollow for us to fill with numbers. Grave nodded once, satisfied that I was breathing again. “Count the village,” he said, softer now, almost a kindness. “Names, grain, tools. Pull your mind out of the wound.”
I swallowed, tasted copper. The ledger felt suddenly weightless at my hip—salvation disguised as paper and ink. I drew it, opened to a fresh page, and let the nib find the margin. My hand shook but the line held.
Somewhere, beyond the river’s bend, a bell began to ring—a clang tinged with confusion. Uldorf was waking to the price of strangers.
At first I thought the smoke still fooled my eyes, but no—door by door, shutter by shudder, the true townsfolk crept into view. Not the silk?vested intruders, not the half?uniform brigands who now bled into the gutters, but potters with clay still under their nails, mill?girls clutching aprons, boys barefoot and brittle with fright. They lined the fringes of the square like startled deer, necks craned, shoulders tight, waiting to learn which side of the ledger their lives would fall.
I counted without meaning to: twenty?two visible, another dozen faces half?hid behind jambs and barrels. Old men with brands for canes, matriarchs gripping kitchen knives, a pair of twins no taller than my belt clinging to each other as if one heartbeat might suffice for two. They had heard the shots, smelled the tar, and decided that whatever judgment followed, best to meet it standing.
Grave noticed them in the same breath. He wiped his sabre on a shredded cloak, sheathed it with a click like a clerk slamming a stamp, and raised his voice just enough to ride the ebbing echo.
“Citizens of Uldorf,” he announced, calm as a balance scale, “the brigands are finished. Their claim on your well and stores is void. Step forward—names first, grievances after. We will hear each one.”
They hesitated. A grey?whiskered baker was the first to shuffle out, palms in plain sight. Others followed, magnet?slow, until the circle closed around us like a tightening belt. Their eyes flicked from the horsemen to Issak and Sul—especially Sul, still spattered, the haft of his club seeping crimson. Fear wrestled with relief across every face.
Mikel whispered at my shoulder, “Best give them numbers, Factor. Nothing soothes panic like dull reality.”
He was right. I stepped onto the wagon tongue—tar sticking to my boots—and lifted my ledger. My hand shook, but the voice held.
“Households first: speak your count. Grain after. Tools, draft beasts, shot—one column each. We salvage truth before shadow claims it.”
A murmur ran the circle, part disbelief, part gratitude for a task they understood. The baker cleared his throat, offered a household of five, one scythe, no powder. A weaver called six mouths and half a sack of barley. I wrote, the quill scratching louder than the dying fires.
Behind me the river kept running, indifferent and essential. Ahead—beyond the ridge we had yet to cross—the next village waited, perhaps with its own silent ring of watchers. But for this heartbeat Uldorf breathed again, and I, blood?stained and powder?burnt, became its temporary census?taker.
Grave’s shadow fell across the page. “Reckon quickly,” he murmured. “Dusk won’t haggle, and the road is long.”
I nodded, dipped the nib once more, and kept tallying the living while the bell’s unsure peal drifted over the roofs like a question not yet answered.
I wiped powder grit from my cheek and whispered a silent inventory: one pistol broken, one knife found, one heartbeat still counting. The battle was over, for now. The campaign had only just begun.

